- I am learning to write an introduction that hook in my audience.Here are my 3 versions.which Monday Morning introduction do you like the best and why?
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.Ahhh! I woke up to a jolt on monday morning .Thank goodness it was just a nightmare,I am glad that I woke up because that cruel dream scared the socks off me.I would feel better waking up for school.
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Don’t you just hate getting up for school on Mondays.Well I hate it, The only time I like getting up on Mondays is if were going on a trip.Other then that I do not like MONDAY MORNINGS______________________________________________________________________________
Definitely the first one did it for me! Great hook Calvin.
ReplyDeleteMrs Burt
Nice writing Calvin I like the third one That was Awesome writing..
ReplyDeleteBy Antonio
Hey Calvin your first paragraph already hooked me in I really like the way you write and one day I will write like you.
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