Friday, April 12, 2013

Who You Gonna Call

Living in an obese town a fat mean snobby ghost stole food from every food restaurant, night and day. Everyday the fat snobby ghost kept stealing food and grew inch by inch. One day a couple of cops swung by up at his snobby house. “Where Is He!” This ghost can turn invisible so the cops have been looking everywhere. where could he be? The search is on. They were thinking and thinking about how we could get that snobby ghost. They had to get FBI or ghost busters. One cop died then 2 FBI died. People were scared. Because of that it looked like there was no hope for us. But we needed to do something. A smart person thought of a vacum. Until Finally the ghost busters came with their vacums. And went inside the house to look for the snobby ghost. They caught him in the living room. Ever since they caught the ghost, the place had never been better. The moral of the story is never to commit crime and try to hide.

Friday, April 5, 2013

Apply The Sauce!

“WOOOOO”! Spongebob Screamed at the top of his lungs well surfing the wild wet waves at goo lagoon. He fell off knowing he had done a great job. But For patrick (stupid one) he was up. “APPLY THE SAUCE.” Patrick exclaimed in a deep low voice. He took out a a bottle of sea sauce (glue). Patrick glued his feet to the board so he won’t fall off and it was time to ride the barreling waves! Riding he yelled I will not be separated, I will not be separated. He was determined to carve up this wave and make it to the end. “ROOOCK.” Patrick screamed he smashed into it with a loud thud and.... tore from his body and his skin followed they both fell on the beach. his skeleton saw some of the surfboard glued to his feet and called out “nice sandals.” “thanks.” replied the skin of Patrick.

Wednesday, April 3, 2013

Just keep swimming


We've been Learning to add detail to speeches here is my example of one.

Settled on a mossy rock Marlin sat, Grumpy at his friend Dory because she lost his only ticket to finding his son Nemo. Dory Approached Marlin and called obnoxiously. “Hey Mr grumpy gills, When life gets you down you know what you gotta do?”  “I don’t know what I gotta do.” mumbled Marlin. “Just keep swimming, just keep swimming, just keep swimming swimming swimming.” “No Singing Dory.” Yelled marlin! But Dory carried on. “DORY STOP IT’S GONNA GET STUCK NOW IT’S IN MY HEAD !” Screamed Marlin. “Sorry...”