tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6012985867333261300.post1137725663275479065..comments2014-11-30T18:43:26.859+13:00Comments on Calvin: Matty BowenPES Blog Gmailhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10430434432980030044noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6012985867333261300.post-7203402010080136552012-06-27T16:50:54.586+12:002012-06-27T16:50:54.586+12:00Great paragraphing - you have a main idea which yo...Great paragraphing - you have a main idea which you expand on in several sentences each time.<br />Your enthusiasm for your subject comes through too. How could anyone read this and not be converted to a Matty Bowen fan!<br />The next step is to check those capital letters. There are some names, dates and sentences without capitals.Miss Gardenhttp://pesroom12and13.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.com